Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

[thefire1]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

372-haha (Apni nidaamat chupanay kay liye khudh per hans raha hoon) haalankay sharminda honay ki baat hay :)

chacha hai tu be aur wo be mast Qalander372-haha


yar tabiiyat Urdu word tey sey start nahi hota

[thefire1]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

@ TOPIC HAAY

Haal uska teray chehray pay likha lagtaa hay
Wo Chup Chap khaRa hay tera kya lagta hay
Ay meray jazba-e-dauran mujh main kashish hai itni
Jo khata hota hai wo teer bhi a lagta hay

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

372-haha (Apni nidaamat chupanay kay liye khudh per hans raha hoon) haalankay sharminda honay ki baat hay :)

Fiada phir be nahi hua... yara kia ho gaia hai tuje

haroof e tahji mein jeem k bad Cheay ati hai(chand wali cheay)aur aap ney haey sey start ker dia any way ab mein cheay aur khaey sey 2 Ashaar post karooon ga.....ta k is line ko complete kia ja sakey aur next sab dheean sey chalyin

[Tanha Hassan]

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Cheay......:think:

[Tanha Hassan]

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Kheay.....:think:

[thefire1]

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SORRY phir dehan nahin dia :(

HAAY

Haal uska teray chehray pay likha lagtaa hay
Wo Chup Chap khaRa hay tera kya lagta hay
Ay meray jazba-e-dauran mujh main kashish hai itni
Jo khata hota hai wo teer bhi a lagta hay

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

SORRY phir dehan nahin dia :(

HAAY

:garmi::garmi::garmi:


yar Ali kia masla hai tere sath???

Haay ka shair aap ney pahley be dia hai...main ney missing word cheay ka shair dia aur apni bari per phir Kheay ka be dia ab aap ney daal ka shair dena tha....

Ab Daal ka shair mein deta hun aap us k badd next word sey dajey ga

[thefire1]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

Thik hay na maartay kiyon ho aap, Daal ka shaair kiyon nahin agar abhi main Zaal say shaair keh daita tou phir meri pitayi kar daitay

:garmi::garmi::garmi:


yar Ali kia masla hai tere sath???

Haay ka shair aap ney pahley be dia hai...main ney missing word cheay ka shair dia aur apni bari per phir Kheay ka be dia ab aap ney daal ka shair dena tha....

Ab Daal ka shair mein deta hun aap us k badd next word sey dajey ga

[thefire1]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

DAAL

Dab-daba aayii wo ankhain jo mera naam aaya
Ishq nakaam sahii phir bhii bohat kaam aayaa

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

Dhaal......:think:

[Gul]

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[Tanha Hassan]

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Raey......:think:

[thefire1]

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ZaKhm-e-tanhaye main Khushboo-e-hina kiski thi
Saayaa deevaar pay mera thaa sadaa kiski thi
Uski raftaar say lipTee rahii meri aaNkhain
Us nay muR kar bhi na dekha kay vafa kis ki thi

[Tanha Hassan]

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seen......:think:

[thefire1]

Re: Alphabatically ....Asha`ar likhein

Aap kay khayal main alphabates thik hain na?!

Khair SHEEEN say shaair hazir-e-khidmat hay


Shaam ko subah-e-chaman yaad aayee
Kisi ki Khushboo-e-badan yaad aayee
Jab Khayaalon main koyee moR ayaa
Teray gesuu ki shikan yaad aayee